Audience Feedback- Filming

After several lessons of editing, we have finally completed our documentary. In order to gain critical perspectives and constructive comments, we showed our documentary to a selected group of students, all of who fell into our target audience, allowing them to watch the documentary and create their own opinions on what they thought was effective and areas that they thought could be improved. We then recorded this and were able to watch it back as a group in order to see the areas that worked best and where we could develop our documentary further. From the comments given, it was clear that our documentary created impact and drew people in to the harmful effects that driving can have, due to the fact that it was something they could relate to as they themselves were beginning driving too. Some of the transitions however, were said to be short and needed lengthening as well as becoming more smoother from one shot to the next, which is something that we took into consideration and ultimately changed in order to relate entirely to our target audience.